Review for "12 Degrees Of Seperation" by Anne Hayes
The author uses the five act drama scheme nicely in this sequel of "12 Rites of Passage", thus giving the piece a wonderful up and down of emotions and dramatic. Even though the ancient Greek drama scheme is used, its rhythm did undergo some changes in this story. Yet, these changes did not harm but support the story.
Especially in the end, it is a cheesy story, but the way there is interesting. Even if there are occasionally some areas when the reader wishes the author would continue the action and not just stand there and contemplate the situation. On other occassions within the narration, though, these moments are done very well. Yet, it does depend on how often one repeats this kind of contemplation with the reader watching it and also in how much detail it is done over and over again. The repetition is a good tool, but only for so many times.
Personnally, I do not want to see them struggle over something that is already set in stone. Maybe this is due to the amount of stories, I have already read, with similar storieslines, but it is only fascinating so often. However, for those out there who did not read as many fanfiction of this area yet, it is one of the best stories.
